Yep, to improve the overall hierarchy and clarity I would: 
1) reduce the logo size (to about one-third of its current size);
2) add white space around the heading (and maybe increase its size too).

By doing so, your work should be even more visible.

Actually, I have been rotating the arrow, this morning because a friend has told the same. I just didn't had the time to publish Good catch Wenzel!

I was worried with the copy of that part mostly because, yesterday I got someone telling me they need websites from scratch...:-)

I am looking for some feedback on the copy of glowup.page to see if the message is clear.
Any opinion would mean the world. 

To me, the message is 100% clear that this is for redesigns and refactors. I am pretty sure I could make the message more clear?

Thank you in advance!

Yep, I think it's better now. Maybe some additional white space would add even more clarity and balance

Ciao Michael, my 2 cents. While the overall design looks pretty clean and polished, I would probably: 
1) swap the visual hierarchy of the logo and the headline
2) add some whitespace around the headline to make it stand out

Ciao! I had some thoughts about that because I really wanted to shows the "work" part on top of the fold, but I guess I could perfectly give some air to that heading...as you mention.

You mean to make the logo smaller?

Grazie mille Matteo :-)

Hi! I think it looks pretty put together and clear but if it was mine I'd make Glow Up page part smaller and the hero text kinda bigger/wider and I'd do something to underline Transform: maybe a gradient, moving? or it can be Transform > Revise > Rework with a small animation?

I am looking for  a way to represent glow, but I just don want a gradient, not gonna lie.

Do you mean to have the three words? or how exactly?

Same as Matteo (visual hierarchy), and maybe rotate the Logo by -90deg to make the Arrow point up, not down. Right now, the arrow suggest a decline, not an incline, in value.

Otherwise the message is clear. Maybe re-word the "If you page…" to "You page… …lacks hierarchy? …? …?"

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