another one: 1. left-aligned text to make it easier to read. 2. removed the circle and replaced it with a smaller yellow decorative element that helps guide the eye. 3. increased type contrast again for dramatic effect.
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for my latest portfolio review, i shared some small ideas for improving the presentation of this designer's work. here's an example: 1. connected the rectangles for more cohesion. 2. reduced space between text for connectivity. 3. increased contrast for dramatic effect.
another one: 1. left-aligned text to make it easier to read. 2. removed the circle and replaced it with a smaller yellow decorative element that helps guide the eye. 3. increased type contrast again for dramatic effect.