I think because of the t’s + 1.. that change to the A doesnt really do that much. I think top one if cleaner

I agree with this.. It feels like there's an opportunity to do something with those double t's or the t and 1

I actually like the 2nd one because without the cross bar in A the logo just seems much cleaner without distractions. 

Also meaning the ascenders part in the “t” and “1” are standing out more. Also the counter space / hole in “d” is mirroring the now empty space in “A”.

@jsiggy For additional context: the identity is for an innovative gym in Rome, offering 1to1 assisted training programs, to improve your physical and mental health. And the payoff is “Many athletes. One mindset.” (hence the A/1 letter upgrade)

Considering this last-second upgrade proposal to an already approved logo design. As always, I like the newest version (below) much more than I should. 

Any feedback is welcome

Clients never love the best things ! Yes this one is the best.

Top version as it's balanced. The 1 has to be distinguished as the "i" and without and "e" understand what the word is. The A is another thing to decipher if you go with V2. Keep it simple and a good clean read with V1. Nice work.

@jsiggy to prove you how right you are, this is my favorite proposal for this project (and rejected by the client).

It looks like gym equipment which I like, but of course it's always up to the client in the end

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