I am looking for some feedback on the copy of glowup.page to see if the message is clear. Any opinion would mean the world. To me, the message is 100% clear that this is for redesigns and refactors. I am pretty sure I could make the message more clear? Thank you in advance!
Ciao Michael, my 2 cents. While the overall design looks pretty clean and polished, I would probably: 1) swap the visual hierarchy of the logo and the headline 2) add some whitespace around the headline to make it stand out
Ciao! I had some thoughts about that because I really wanted to shows the "work" part on top of the fold, but I guess I could perfectly give some air to that heading...as you mention. You mean to make the logo smaller? Grazie mille Matteo :-)
Yep, to improve the overall hierarchy and clarity I would: 1) reduce the logo size (to about one-third of its current size); 2) add white space around the heading (and maybe increase its size too). By doing so, your work should be even more visible.
Yep, I think it's better now. Maybe some additional white space would add even more clarity and balance
