Both look really good )
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Tracking is too tight to be viewed at the size Posts displays it. On a conference slide it would be ok / maybe.
Also make sure your ➊ icons are consistent - same set, same color, same proportions (inline height can match line-height) ➋ lines are balanced (“orders for / delivery status”) ➌ Central field doesn’t use space effectively, top is filler Overall solid pass though, love the map
Nice! 1) For single screens (like delivery tracking),place them in a device. 2) Don’t be afraid to crop rather than fade and blur. 3) Try extruding a thing beyond its compartment for more visual interest.